The first logo doesn't work because the "L" in LANE gets lost and you can't see it. The second logo is much better, the script is elegant and it goes well with LANE.
I agree that the first version isn't really working. Having that black bar behind lane really hurts the readability and makes it feel very heavy on one side. The second one has a better personality...it feels very light and classic yet contemporary. It looks like it could be a signature, which is nice.
The first logo doesn't work because the "L" in LANE gets lost and you can't see it. The second logo is much better, the script is elegant and it goes well with LANE.
ReplyDeleteI agree that the first version isn't really working. Having that black bar behind lane really hurts the readability and makes it feel very heavy on one side. The second one has a better personality...it feels very light and classic yet contemporary. It looks like it could be a signature, which is nice.
ReplyDelete